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Bonjour, Pouvez-vous me corriger ma traduction, qu'elle progresse vers un anglais naturel. Merci par avance.
I think that the reason of the choice to take care of the instruction of her child, varies according to families; for some they are educational reasons, for the other religious or philosophic, for the others else it is the solution which seemed to them as necessities even saving further to particular problems of their children (problems of health, school, financial, geographic problems, etc.) And for others else, this choice appeared at them as a continuation of the pleasure which they already had to live with their children and the desire to continue to take care of the education or simply to accompany, the evolution, the instruction, the development of these last ones. Finally, an important reason of the choice of this educational shape is often a distrust with regard to the institutional educational system. The motivation seems to be also politic and psychological: respect the freedom and the blooming of the children, privilege a real more autonomousand free, "social" life.
Furthermore to my opinion, the main advantages are the past with the children, the control of the fact than the child learns, a bigger implication in the consequentive transmission, the protection of the child towards negative social situations. Besides, the school at the house allows the parents to take charge individually of the child and allows them to adapt the learning at its pace and to its difficulties. However there are also inconveniences: the cost, the motivation of the child, the necessity of justifying its choice towards her child and the others, the necessary effort to make sure that the child meets the other children of her age and the fear of the parents to be incapable to cover all the school programs punishing their child in her higher education.
In conclusion, I think that this system beyond its advantages and beyond its inconveniences really depends on the way the parents apply it; it is necessary to find a just medium. Indeed, it is necessary to make sure not to leave the child remote from the society what is I think of the major risk.

voilà le texte de base :"Je pense que la raison du choix de prendre en charge l'instruction de son enfant, varie selon les familles ; pour certaines ce sont des raisons pédagogiques, pour d'autres religieuses ou philosophiques, pour d'autres encore c'est une solution qui leur est apparue comme nécessaire voire salvatrice suite à des problèmes particuliers de leurs enfants (problèmes de santé, problèmes scolaires, financiers, géographiques, etc.) et pour d'autres encore, ce choix s'est présenté à eux comme un prolongement du plaisir qu'ils avaient déjà de vivre avec leurs enfants et le désir de continuer à prendre en charge l'éducation ou simplement accompagner, l'évolution, l'instruction, le développement de ces derniers.
Enfin, une raison importante du choix de cette forme d'éducation est souvent une méfiance par rapport au système d'éducation institutionnel. La motivation semble être aussi "politique" et psychologique: respecter la liberté et l'épanouissement des enfants, privilégier une véritable vie "sociale", plus autonome et libre.
De plus à mon avis, les principaux avantages sont le temps passé avec les enfants, le contrôle de ce que l'enfant apprend, une plus grande implication dans la transmission de valeurs, la protection de l'enfant vis-à-vis de situations sociales négatives. En outre, l'école à la maison permet aux parents de s'occuper individuellement de l'enfant et leur permet d'adapter l'apprentissage à son rythme et à ses difficultés. Cependant il y a aussi des inconvénients : le coût, la motivation de l'enfant, la nécessité de justifier son choix vis-à-vis de son enfant et des autres, l'effort nécessaire pour s'assurer que l'enfant rencontre d'autres enfants de son âge et la peur des parents d'être incapables de couvrir l'ensemble des programmes scolaires pénalisant leur enfant dans ses études supérieures.
En conclusion, je pense que ce système au-delà de ses avantages et de ses inconvénients dépend vraiment de la manière dont les parents l’appliquent ; il faut trouver un juste milieu."

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Dear M.Behr

I am really interested by the experience I can gain during this internship in Engineering and Technology Division North America Labinal.
This internship period is the achievement of my engineer formation and such an experience is very important.

I want to work on aeronautical engineering, and I have plan my studies according to this point of view (Mechanic, Electronic, Safety, Reliability, Systems Engineering, Desktop Mechanic, Advanced Conception, Ergonomics and Interface Man/Machine, Spoiling Mechanical, Breaking Mechanical, Ambient Acoustic, Management and over various knowledge).
During this internship I will practice all theses knowledge and learn over ones wich I have interest in.

Furthermore I search a foreign experience to perform my English and increase my possibilities to work on an international topic. This opportunity to work with an American team and live in United States is the best one.

For my future career, an experience in your company is ideal stepping stone on technical and humans’ points.

We told about the type of work I will make during this period. I have the technical knowledge to do it and the motivation to work in an American context on your company.

I hope you can realize the will and the motivation I have for such an experience.

Your faithfully.

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